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Test pilot
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Author:  Delanish [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 12:53 am ]
Post subject:  Test pilot

Ok i'm going to do this *sighs*

The Liches head is messed up
I couldn't get the index finger to point right at you
No background
horrible printing
i should use a different pencil then an HB
Halfling all screwed up in pose and face.
Halfling propostions are all messed up
Dog attack pose is off
style of dog changes from frame three to four
Not enough detail on lich in frame four

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With some photoshop editing a tiny bit (not finished)

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Author:  Delanish [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 9:36 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Test pilot

This time i tried a 3b pencil it scanned much better

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Author:  Delanish [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 10:11 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Test pilot

i will note i need to flush these characters out more so i can draw them better in there poses without to much disproportions (I miss my light table from collage)

Author:  Delanish [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 10:50 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Test pilot

The big problem before i host it is a name for it...that's what i'm stuck with.

Dreamer's Escape
OMG FANTASY GIMME!
The Admirals Pub
(Joke) Captain Fang told me to write this -Gasps- Apples!
It's DNDNWTD (Dungeons and do not wake the Dragon)
Fantasy, Cause Real life is overrated
We have swords and umm gods and Magic Whoosh!
Curses Elves...

I'm honestly throwing this out at random here...i'm really thinking to hard on this

Author:  M'reen [ Sat Nov 13, 2010 12:01 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Test pilot

Days of Delanash
Days Like These


?

I'm glad you edited the first one - I honestly couldn't make out the words. (You missed bolding a Fetch! at the bottom of the dog pic, which would have made it funnier if I'd seen that the first time around).

The second comic is much easier to see, so your technique is getting better!

Name wise, perhaps if we saw more characters (and had their names mentioned in comic or in a blurb below) you or any readers might have more ideas of what to name it. 8)

Author:  Delanish [ Mon Jan 31, 2011 11:17 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Test pilot

I'm getting back to this but trying this time more on webtablet i'm still curious i swear you our fans should have a get together some time even it just say at a bar in halifax or a game store

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